After A Nightmare

Alright, I am going to give this critique a try, so please bear with me. Firstly, I would like to say that I was very intrigued by this piece because it reminded me of a story a friend of mine had been writing. So, to see that it is actually based on a role play of yours I thought was really cool! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I'm a sucker for back stories.
As far as the picture goes, I think the colors are very well done, and vibrant. The sketch is well defined and clear, and in my opinion well drawn. I do think that the arm off to the side is maybe in an awkward position, if it was in front showing the hand itself, or the start of it, I think that might have been a bit more natural. Or even if it was placed on Frisk's back. The face is a bit stiff but I like it that way, I think it portrays the situation well, a strong masculine figure comforting another, but not breaking his posture. I like it. And the last thing I wanted to mention was the text. I love dialogue, but I do think that if it was written more neatly, it would change the whole level of the picture, especially the word 'forbidden' being broken.

I hope I didn't offend you with this at all. I really do like the picture as a whole and definitely don't think I could do any better. Thank you for letting me voice my opinion! Keep up the good work!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>